Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Thursday, January 23, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Kia Ora Jacob,
ReplyDeleteI agree, the dance moves were super cool and with the number of dancers onstage, they created some amazing optical illusions. Different customs can be a bit confusing at times but that’s ok, we have some customs that must be a bit weird to others too, it’s what makes people unique and interesting. What other artists and songs would you like to see in their music instead of those they featured?
I really like how you have explained your opinions on the dance with such detail. I like that you discussed things you liked and things you disliked to give your post variety in content.
It would be really awesome if you could include pictures or colours into your post to really engage your readers. Perhaps you could look at these tips for making eye catching blog posts to help or grab some inspiration.
Hei konā mai,
Shannon (SLJ)