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Thursday, January 9, 2020

Week 1 Day 5 Activity 3

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  1. Kia ora Jacob, this is Kieryn from the Summer Learning Journey.
    You have done an amazing job creating this blog post about Ryan Dungey.
    I had never heard of him before, so I looked him up and found out how he is a former motorcycle racer who retired from the sport in 2015.
    It sounds like Ryan had a fantastic career in motorbike racing, and did so well at his chosen sport. You mentioned how he now owns one of Honda’s teams, so even though he is retired from the sport, he can still partake in some form.
    Do you ride motorcycles?
    Have you ever wanted to race motorcycles professionally?
    When I was younger, my dad owned quite a few motorbikes. He brought a small bike for my siblings and I to learn to ride on however I wasn’t the biggest fan of motorbike racing.
    I really like the image you have used as the background of this post, and think it is great how you have created such an insightful post about this amazing racer.

    Quick Tip- The red writing is a little bit hard to read over the background image. Perhaps you could edit this post and make the writing bold so that it is easier for your viewers to read.
    Nga mihi

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