Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Wednesday, January 15, 2020
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Kia Ora Jacob,
ReplyDeleteIt would be so scary in prison. The way you have described it makes it sound horrible and frightening. I can’t even imagine what it’d be like to be so cold all the time and not to eat any of the foods I like. You’ve really done a wonderful job summarising the conditions Mandela would have faced in prison.
What’s your favourite hot meal, the one you couldn’t live without? Mine would have to be macaroni and cheese. It’s so delicious, especially when I’m cold.
It would be really awesome if you could include pictures or colours into your post to really engage your readers. Perhaps you could look at these tips for making eye catching blog posts to help or grab some inspiration.
Keep up the great work!
Ngā mihi maioha,
Shannon (SLJ)