Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Thursday, January 23, 2020
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Kia ora Jacob, this is Kieryn from the Summer Learning Journey.
ReplyDeleteWell done for participating in the Summer Learning Journey and creating this blog post about a movie you would like to write.
‘Fight For Me’ is a great name to have chosen for a movie, especially considering the plot is about becoming a ninja! How did you decide on this name?
I really like your plot idea for this movie! Having the ultimatum of either fighting Crymin or risking his chance of becoming a ninja puts quite a dilemma onto Chuck, and it is this dilemma which will help make the movie more intriguing.
The names for your main characters, Chuck and Crymin, are very interesting names to have chosen. Why did you choose these names?
I really like the way you made a film strip to share you ideas, and think that the characters you have created look fantastic!
Keep up the great work!
Nga mihi