Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
This Week I have created a persuasive speech on Junk food being ban at schools. I am against in this text. I have tried to put many types of sentences in my work. Here is the completed work!!!
Schools should ban Junk food!!!
Imagine a Healthy world
Nah, I don’t think so you don’t have to be Vegetarian to live. I believe that schools should not ban junk food because children’s Parents know what is best for their Kid and they don’t need to be told what to do. Many schools have junk food at a tuck shop or cafeteria and enjoy it.
It is okay to have a reasonable amount of junk food and there can be balanced diet junk foods too. It is great to eat your vegetables but you also need iron and have something that tastes good but I am not saying Fruit and Veggies taste bad.It is also good to not just have junk food so if you always have Junk food mix it up a bit or just have it homemade.
If you are worried you will become obese do exercise daily.
There is no way I am going to stop eating Junk food!
Get up and make your own junk food if you have too.
My name is Jacob and today I have been doing not much but my teacher, Wanted me to post this,
Today is 26 of August and it is so close to my B - day just 2 days away. But today it is not about me it is about Grit and Perseverance. I have made a Google Drawing on, 3 times I have shown Grit, 3 times my friends have shown grit, What I think Grit and Perseverance is, 3 times Lisa Carrington has shown grit and 3 times Caitlin Regal has shown grit. So I've am going to share it with you.
If you live were I am from you will know we are in lock down again, YAY :( Not. Yup I know it is annoying but it might end tomorrow and I hope it will because it is my B-day in 5 day's
little girl watching and waiting while the children looked
through the box like jaguar´s eating their food.
The girl smiled when she saw the boy
zooming around the room as he was
moving the speed of light. Her smile
eventually faded as she
glared straight back at the use to be
Umbrella, All she saw were
dark clouds up in the air. Her amazing,
beautiful Umbrella was gone.
This text is 1 chunk of Umbrella, We watched the video about Umbrella here is the Video
This is about a boy who was a refugee and one a girl comes and with a yellow umbrella and it is so sad watch to find out more. Warning there is no talking.
Hi guys,
this week is the last week of school,
soo we learned about Matariki.
this is my writing reading for Matriki.
Make sure to look at my Matariki Writing and Maths.
Hi,
This week we had to use
a Shade' O " meter and a Vocabulary vault.
It was super fun. We also used
Adverbial phrase, Repetition and a rhetorical question.
He is a some words from the Vocabulary vault
Sprawled, frowned, wonder, nightmare and effervescent ETC. Nightmare was my Idea.
And he is a pic of a Shade' O 'Meter
Hey Guys, This is My Mrs Earl Writing Mrs Earl teaches me this week Enjoy This Seal Pup Writing.
I Write about this Photo
SEAL PUP
AS DAWN CAME, Pup felt like he had fallen into a Never ending Hole. He was all lonely and He Just wanted to get to the Bob. He was so sad that he would run to the other Bob to get HELP. Pup Sprawled across the ice.
Awhile after Midnight, Pup was having a Nightmare in real life. He was Scared. He was Scared and Terrified. He was Scared, Terrified and Sad. He was Scared, Terrified, Sad and Worried. Will Pup ever find the Bob?
Today we will learn how to write a great blog post and comment. First I will tell you how to do a good comment then a blog post.
Enjoy
In a comment you need to say something thoughtful😯 like, Your look donuts then something helpful😕 like, Next time maybe get custard and put it in your donuts and last but not lease it is ask a Question like, Why did you make donuts.
Now it is time to see how to write a blog post. Have a hooking title, you can have a label, Say Hello to your readers. A hooking title is a title that will get your readers to read your post like, How Too... The ... will get you more readers. As I said before you can label your things so your readers can see what subject there under. Make sure to say Hi or hello because its rude not to.
THANK YOU FOR READING MY POST
MY GOAL: draw conclusions and get meaning from the text by 'reading between the lines.