Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Thursday, January 23, 2020
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Jacob, this is Kieryn from the Summer Learning Journey.
Thank you for participating in the Summer Learning Journey and sharing with us this blog post about your role model, your dad.
Your dad sounds like such an amazing person who really cares about you. I can’t believe that he taught you how to ride both bikes and dirt bikes! Not only do these both sound like such fun activities to take part in, but they are even more special because you can do them with him!
You mentioned how your dad has a good job. What job does he have?
It would be awesome if you could reply to this comment and let me know!
The photo you have included of yourself and your dad is wonderful, and it is so lovely to hear how he spends a lot of time with you. What kinds of things do you and your dad like to do together?
You have done a great job on this blog post! Keep up the excellent work!
Nga mihi