Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Saturday, January 18, 2020
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1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
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3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Kia Ora Jacob,
ReplyDeleteYou’ve summarised the events that made Rosa Parks a hero brilliantly. She worked so hard to stand up for what she believed in and made amazing progress in the movement to end segregation.
People like Rosa Parks and Martin Luther King had to stand up for what they believed in even when it was hard. Have you ever had to stand up for what you believed in?
Quick tip: perhaps you could include some visuals of the similes you have created to really enhance your post. These could add interest and appeal to your readers.
Happy blogging!
Ngā mihi maioha,
Shannon (SLJ)