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Wednesday, January 8, 2020

Week 1 Day 3 Activity 3

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  1. Kia ora Jacob, this is Kieryn from the Summer Learning Journey.
    You have done an excellent job participating in the Summer Learning Journey activities and creating this blog post about your dream job.
    Being a detective would be an amazing career, and it is so great how you have already thought about who could help you achieve this dream.
    Your teachers, parents and the police are all wonderful people who have various skills that would assist you to get where you want to be.
    What is it about becoming a detective that you like?
    Do you need to go to a polytechnic or university to become a detective?
    What are some ways you could help yourself to achieve this dream job?
    I really like the yellow background you have used for this blog post, and think that the black writing over top looks extremely elegant and sophisticated.
    I also quite like the images you have chosen to accompany this post. Would you be able to include the source where you got these images from?
    Nga mihi

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