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Tuesday, June 23, 2020

Mrs Earl Writing Week 11 Term 2

Hey Guys,
This is My Mrs Earl Writing
Mrs Earl teaches me this week
Enjoy This Seal Pup Writing. 





I Write about this Photo 



SEAL PUP 

AS DAWN CAME,
Pup felt like he had fallen into a Never ending Hole. He was all lonely and He Just wanted to get to the Bob. He was so sad that he would run to the other Bob to get HELP. Pup Sprawled across the ice.

Awhile after Midnight,
Pup was having a Nightmare in real life. He was Scared. He was Scared and Terrified. He was Scared, Terrified and Sad. He was Scared, Terrified, Sad and Worried.
Will Pup ever find the Bob?

THANKS FOR READING

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1 comment:

  1. Jo EarlJune 23, 2020 at 2:54 PM

    Well done Jacob - I can see you have worked hard to complete the three challenges. You have used two phrases to show time has passed so well done! I love the use of repetition for effect. Finishing with a rhetorical question - well done! Great listening and great writing!

    Which one of these techniques will you try again?

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