Hi,
My name is Jacob. Me and my Friends,
Alex, Leo and Romeo made a News Report for
R.e. It was fun. I did not get parts in this but I was the
Film manager, Writer ( With my Friends ) and the Editor.
This was so fun and today I am going to share it with you!!!
( Use Headphones, Alex was Quiet )
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Jacob,
ReplyDeleteI really like how I can tell that you put a lot of work in to this News report . I like how you did that thing at the start and and at the end. for feed back I think you should tell them to be a bit louder and look at the camera more.
-Ella