Hi,
Yesterday It was St Patrick day.
It was so fun hanging out with my friends,
Bronson, Leo, Maz, Romeo and ETC.
Here it is,
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Hi,
Yesterday It was St Patrick day.
It was so fun hanging out with my friends,
Bronson, Leo, Maz, Romeo and ETC.
Here it is,
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
i like how you have showed how to make a good comment so me reading this can now make better blog comments but maybe next time you could use some more colour to make you work pop! better.
ReplyDeleteHello Ella,
DeleteThank you for commenting on my blog post. Next time you can maybe look what blog post you comment on.😜😜😜😁
But Thanks for Commenting.
From Jacob
Some interesting facts about St Patrick Jacob. I like the images. Maybe next time you could write more of an explanation that relates to the post so that we know what your goals are. Keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteThank you Mrs Earl. I will include as much as I can next time. But other
DeleteThan that thanks for looking and commenting on my blog post.
From Jacob
Great Job Jacob,
ReplyDeleteThis is really nice the back ground is really cool. These facts are really interesting but a brief about what people do on St Patrick's day would be really cool as well.
-Beth
Hi Beth,
DeleteThank you for the feedback. I will try to include more info next time.
Thanks, Jacob
Hello Jacob, its Leo I like how you used those facts I learnt lots, I didn't know that st Patrick wasn't from Ireland. Next time you could add the story of st Patrick I would love to know about the story. What else do you know about st Patrick?
ReplyDeleteHello Jacob I love your St Patricks day facts I thought that St patrick was Irsh maybe next time you could add in a qeustion and you could add why you made this and why St patricks day is inportant.
ReplyDeleteOlivia